Over dinner one night on our recent trip to the Oregon Shakespeare Festival, my friend Penny Williamson and I go to talking about what a lot of our writers friends call “deal-breakers.” Something in a book–a type of plot twist or character, a setting, a premise–that will make you not read ever the most well-recommended book or put a book down unfinished if one stumbles on it unawares. Rather to my own surprise, I realized that while I have plenty of likes and dislikes as a reader, I have very few actual deal-breakers.
I don’t tend to like stories in which a major part of the conflict is based on a misunderstanding. And yet to some extent that ‘s true in The Scarlet Pimpernel, a book I love. But the misunderstanding is so grounded in who Marguerite and Percy are as characters that it makes for fascinating reading (and there’s never a sense of “oh, if they just had a conversation they could clear this up.”). I don’t like series in which an ongoing character, particularly a love interest dies, and yet I’m currently thoroughly engrossed in Elizabeth George’s Careless in Red, despite the events of her last two books. I have a really hard time with books in which children die, but several writers I very much admire–Dorothy Dunnett, Sebastian Faulks, Penny herself–have used this plot element in ways that were so integral to the story I couldn’t quarrel with it, however devastating the scenes.
In general, I prefer books with happy endings. But I recognize that happy endings don’t suit all books. I found the ending of Atonement so fascinating in what it was saying about the very nature of fiction, that I can’t imagine the story ending in a different way (or perhaps I should say “ways” :-). In our conversation, Penny and I agreed that Casablanca wouldn’t work with a happy ending–that, in fact, if Rick and Ilsa went off together, it would somehow cheapen the power of their love for each other.
Are there elements in books that are deal-breakers for you? Things that will make you not pick up a book or stop reading a book or series? Have you ever read a book with an element you thought was a deal-breaker for you but found it worked for you in the context of that story? If you read the Charles & Mélanie books, are there any turns the series could take that would be deal-breakers?
Be sure to check out the Fraser Correspondence. I’ve just posted a letter from Aspasia Newland to her sister, written as Aspasia is about to leave for the house party at Dunmykel.
Update 28 May: I’m blogging today on History Hoydens about the ethical and logistical challenges of writing fictional stories that involve real people and events. Do stop by and join the discussion.
May 26, 2008 at 1:12 pm
At last, there’s a name for it! 😉
I’m a very prejudiced reader. I don’t like romances (of the Mills and Boon/Harlequin stable), as a rule, chick lit, ‘large print’ sagas (stories about the recent past, a la Catherine Cookson), or ‘must reads’ (I still haven’t read ‘The Da Vinci Code’). I will give up on an author or a series of books if I spot a ‘formula’, which sadly happens with nearly all prolific writers (Stephen King has lost the knack).
What I do like must fit somewhere in between! Thanks for diagnosing these symptoms, Tracy.
May 26, 2008 at 7:58 pm
Well, I do like happy endings, but I only demand them in romances! 🙂
It’s hard to say absolutely, “I won’t read a book with this or that”; I have found books I *loved* despite plot points that would normally drive me insane. So I can’t say I won’t ever read this or that.
So…
I don’t like immature heroes. And this covers a lot of ground. The “my mommy was a meanie, so I hate all women/but I’ll sleep with every female who can’t climb a tree fast enough” guy bugs the hell out of me.
The “I *know* you really, really like me” hero makes my flesh crawl. If a guy I’d been turning down over and over somehow tricked me into his car and said he was taking me to a place where we could be alone, he’d have a face full of pepper spray. And broken teeth. No means NO!
I hate the “you must give up your ambitions and prove you are not a cold, hard career woman to be worthy of me” hero. Get a clue, jerk. If she has to change for you, it’s not love.
The “I’ve been nice to you, so why don’t you love meeeeee?!” hero? I hate him with the heat of 1000 suns.
May 26, 2008 at 11:22 pm
Thanks for commenting, Sarah! I think we all have likes and dislikes as readers–otherwise it would be impossible to choose books :-). Have you ever found yourself liking a book despite the fact that it falls in one of categories you normally avoid?
May 26, 2008 at 11:29 pm
Thanks for commenting, JMM! I’m with you on finding I can love books with plot points that would normally drive me insane. Can you think of any good examples? I think I could even enjoy a romance with an unhappy ending–à la “Casablanca” or “Atonement.”
May 27, 2008 at 7:47 am
I did once read a novel set in medieval England, or thereabouts, which was basically a romance – hero and heroine pushed together in extreme circumstances, fall in love – and liked it! (Shields of Pride, by Elizabeth Chadwick, I think the author is.) It rather worried me, so I didn’t read any more of her books! Good writing conquers all, but I have to get past that first hurdle. The cover helps enormously, I’ve found: Fabio standing over a woman with big hair and a ‘Regency’ frock will turn me right off, but old portraits and subtle lettering is a lure I can rarely refuse.
May 27, 2008 at 3:17 pm
So agree about good writing conquering all, Sarah. Elizabeth Chadwick is a wonderful writer. I really like the blend of history and romance in her books. And though as a writer I know how little control the author usually has over the cover, I too can be drawn in or put off by a cover.
May 27, 2008 at 7:22 pm
Elizabeth Chadwick’s subtle application of historical research is what kept me reading, I agree – no infodumps (in fact, I had to look up some terms, which is how it should be!), just relevant description. I also liked her heroine. Maybe I should read another of her titles? 😉
May 27, 2008 at 7:41 pm
I’d definitely recommend trying some more Elizabeth Chadwick books!
July 2, 2011 at 7:38 pm
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